My feeling about the first lecture.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
I am the student who are taking the phone english course with lina
in power english.
Frankly , I had a first class today.
At first, I thought that 15 minutes would be long.
but It wasn't
My teacher lina has the best pronounciation among the teachers
I have met so far searching the phone english company.
and her smile is great~
I am aiming for getting a I.H grade in Opic which will be held in 5/23
and next year I hope to get a promotion.
Even if I will get a I.H , I may continue attending this course
beacuse my main purpose is talking with foreigner without any difficulties
not a just promotion.
I hope to improve my english much~
Fighting.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름].Thank you for that,I'm so honored that I'm your teacher too.I really hope that I can be a big help to you in aiming an I.H grade in OPIC.I have a great smile because I have agreat student like you who is very eager to learn and very cooperative. The best help that you could have is yourself [이름].Believe in your skills,its innate skills that you have to develop to get the best out of it.When talking,don't be hesitate to express your ideas and thoughts that will cover your grammar errors.Speak naturally and stay calm.SMILE!
LINA
Hi.
>>Correct I am the student who are taking the phone english course with lina
in power english.>>I am the student who is taking the phone English course with Lina in Power EnglishFrankly , I had a first class today.
>>Correct
>>Frankly, I had my first class today.At first, I thought that 15 minutes would be long. but It wasn't>>Correct
My teacher lina has the best pronounciation among the teachers >>Correct
>>Pronunciation. Correct spelling
I have met so far searching the phone english company.
>>I have met her from searching phone English companyand her smile is great~
>>Correct
I am aiming for getting a I.H grade in Opic which will be held in 5/23>>I am aiming to get an I.H grade in OPIC which will be held on 5/23
and next year I hope to get a promotion.
>>And next year I hope to get a promotion.Even if I will get a I.H , I may continue attending this course
>>even if I will get an I.H, I will continue attending this course.beacuse my main purpose is talking with foreigner without any difficulties
>>Because my main purpose is talking to a foreigner without any difficulties.not a just promotion.
>>Correct
I hope to improve my english much~>>I hope to improve my English more.Fighting.
>>Fight!
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