my feeling in fall

2015-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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it’s fall. on my way to go to work, I smelled the fall. Fall is the season that I’d like to fall in love with someone, And I’d like to go on a trip, And I’d like to see a friend whom I don’t meet for a long time, And also I’d like to write a letter to someone. But I’m getting older, Althought my mind is going wherever I want to go, and is doing whatever I want to do But My citcumstance doesn’t allow m to do that

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for your composition! It seems like you\'re in a melancholic mood because of the season. Don\'t get too carried away. Your circumstances now may not allow you to do the things that you want, but you can still do something by planning ahead. I\'m sure you\'ll be able to meet friends you haven\'t seen for a long time someday. You can find time to write a short letter to someone. Most importantly, you can fall in love all over again to the same woman - your wife. Take care and cheer up! T. JanE ^^ It’s fall. >> Correct on my way to go to work, I smelled the fall. >> On my way to work, I smelled the fragrance of fall. Fall is the season that I’d like to fall in love with someone. >> Correct And I’d like to go on a trip. >> Correct. And I’d like to see a friend whom I don’t meet for a long time, >> I would also like to see a friend whom I haven\'t seen for a long time. And also I’d like to write a letter to someone. >> Correct But I’m getting older. >> Correct Althought my mind is going wherever I want to go, and is doing whatever I want to do But My citcumstance doesn’t allow m to do that >> Although my mind wanders to places I want to go and things I want to do, my circumstances do not allow me to do so.

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