My feelings hearing \"Hi\" to someone

2024-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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When I met someone at the first time and he/she says \"Hi\", I feel very awkward. Because I\'m introvert person and I don\'t have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable. But there are some cases I can adjust this situation. First, I don\'t care that my friend\'s parents say \"Hi\" even though we meet first time. Because I\'m younger than them, and I get informations who they are to my friends. Second, I don\'t care that strangers says \"Hi\" in my office. Because I\'m a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office. So It\'s okay that senior met first time says \"Hi\" to me!

강사 첨삭

Good job, [이름]! You were able to share your thoughts about saying “Hi” to strangers. You have also given concrete examples. ^^ I have updated some tenses in your sentences.
-Khai
When I met someone at the first time and he/she says \"Hi\", I feel very awkward.

>> When I meet someone for the first time and he/she says, \"Hi,\" I feel very awkward.

Because I\'m introvert person and I don\'t have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable.

>> It is because I\'m an introverted person and I don\'t have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable.

But there are some cases I can adjust this situation.

>> But there are some cases where I can adjust to this situation.

First, I don\'t care that my friend\'s parents say \"Hi\" even though we meet first time.

>> First, I don\'t care if my friend\'s parents say \"Hi,\" even though we meet for the first time.

Because I\'m younger than them, and I get informations who they are to my friends.

>> It is because I\'m younger than them, and I get information about who they are from my friends.

Second, I don\'t care that strangers says \"Hi\" in my office.

>> Second, I don\'t care if strangers say \"Hi\" in my office.

Because I\'m a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office.

>> It is because I\'m a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office.

So It\'s okay that senior met first time says \"Hi\" to me!
>> So it\'s okay if a senior who I met for the first time says \"Hi\" to me!

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