My field trip

On Tuesday,I went to the field trip. I visited a independence hall in ,Cheonan-si,Chungcheongnam-do. First,I ate lunch with my friends. Next,I looked around the museum. It explains our country's history and culture. Also,it informs the Korean independence movement grew out of the Japanese colonial rule of the Korean peninsula from 1910 to 1945. I think our country's ancestors were very brave. And I saw many cultural properties in the museum. It was very great day.

Hi! I am so happy that you had a great day during your fieldtrip.Thank you for sharing this moment with me. I really appreciate your effort in telling me about your experiences. You were able to express yourself well. I hope that you will have a great weekend. See you again! Take Care!

T.Jane

On Tuesday,I went to the field trip.

>>Last Tuesday,I went to a field trip.
I visited a independence hall in ,Cheonan-si,Chungcheongnam-do.

>>I visited the Independence Hall in Cheonan-si,Chungcheongnam-do.
First, I ate lunch with my friends.

>>Correct
Next, I looked around the museum.

>>Correct
It explains our country\'s history and culture.

>> Correct 
Also,it informs the Korean independence movement grew out of the Japanese colonial rule of the Korean peninsula from 1910 to 1945.

>>Also it informed the people about the Korean independence movement that grew out of the Japanese colonial rule in the Korean peninsula from 1910 to 1945.
I think our country\'s ancestors were very brave.

>>Correct
And I saw many cultural properties in the museum.

>> Correct 
It was very great day.

>> It was a very great day.