My first day at work is embarassing.

2025-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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I still remember my first day at my first job. Everything was new and unfamiliar, and I didn\\\'t know what to do at first. I felt nervous and a little shy because I didn\\\'t know anyone there. At the same time, I was really excited to start a new chapter in my life. I tried to smile and did my best even though I made a few small mistakes Fortunately, my co- workers were very kind and helped me whenever I need something. By the end of the day, I felt much more comfortable and confident. Looking back, that day taught me how to overcome fear and adapt to a new environment.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name]! That’s such a relatable experience! I love how you stayed positive and pushed through the nerves. It must have felt so rewarding by the end of the day.
-T. Sonny
I still remember my first day at my first job. 
>>Correct!
Everything was new and unfamiliar, and I didn\\\'t know what to do at first. 
>>Everything was new and unfamiliar, and at first, I didn’t know what to do.
I felt nervous and a little shy because I didn\\\'t know anyone there.
>> I felt nervous and a little shy because I didn’t know anyone there.
At the same time, I was really excited to start a new chapter in my life.
>>Correct!
I tried to smile and did my best even though I made a few small mistakes.
>>Correct!
Fortunately, my co- workers were very kind and helped me whenever I need something.
>>Fortunately, my coworkers were very kind and helped me whenever I needed something.
By the end of the day, I felt much more comfortable and confident.
>>Correct!
Looking back, that day taught me how to overcome fear and adapt to a new environment.
>>Correct!

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