My first day in school

2010-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

My first day of school was very exciting because I had really wanted to be a university student It was 2001, I met many people and the professor in a class. Since It was our first day, the professor didn't teach us. He introduced himself to us , and we greeted eachother. After a class, we all went to a pub for the welcoming ceremony. Seniors ordered us to drink a cup of alchol. They looked scary at first, but as time went by I realized they were good person

강사 첨삭

College memories would really make us think back with nostalgia. -_-  Anyway, here are you corrections: -Teacher JM   My first day of school was very exciting because I had really wanted to be a university student>>>CorrectIt was 2001, I met many people and the professor in a class.>>>It was 2001, I met many people in a class, including the professor.Since It was our first day, the professor didn't teach us.>>>CorrectHe introduced himself to us , and we greeted each other.>>>He introduced himself to us and we greeted each other.After a class, we all went to a pub for the welcoming ceremony.>>>CorrectSeniors ordered us to drink a cup of alchol.>>>The senior students ordered us to drink a cup of alcohol.They looked scary at first, but as time went by I realized they were good person>>>They looked scary at first, but as time went by I realized that they were good persons.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·