My first diary
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Today our school started of summer vacation. So excited!!
I don’t have summer vacation plan, now but l’ll plan it.
I ate hamberger in lunch. It is new menu in mom’s touch (korean hamberger restaurant).
It was very delicious. But a little bit spicy.
Tomorrow l’m going to watch disney movie. I’ll set language and subtitle in english.
I think it is very hard for me. But it’s ok. Cause I’m learning english
강사 첨삭
Hello Yu [이름]!
Great job on writing your first diary. Check the corrections and memorize the right ones. Reading English books and articles is very helpful for your vocabulary and grammar. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Today, our school started the summer vacation so I am so excited.
I don’t have summer vacation plan, now but l’ll plan it.
I don’t have summer vacation plan, now but l’ll plan it.
>>I don\'t have any summer vacation plan now, but I\'ll plan it soon.
I ate hamberger in lunch.
I ate hamberger in lunch.
>>I ate a hamburger for lunch today.
It is new menu in mom’s touch (korean hamberger restaurant).
>>It is a new menu in Mom\'s touch which is a Korean hamburger restaurant.
It was very delicious. But a little bit spicy.
It was very delicious. But a little bit spicy.
>>It was very delicious but a little bit spicy.
Tomorrow l’m going to watch disney movie.
Tomorrow l’m going to watch disney movie.
>>Tomorrow I\'m going to watch a Disney movie.
I’ll set language and subtitle in english.
>>I\'ll set the language and subtitle to English.
I think it is very hard for me.
I think it is very hard for me.
>> I think it is very hard for me.
But it’s ok. Cause I’m learning english
>> But it is okay because I will be able to learn English on my own. ^^
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