My first diary in English.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear^^
Thank you so much for sending this composition. You can express yourself well in writing. I have corrected some sentences for you.
Have a nice day^^
My first diary in English.
>>correct
It was a little bit tough day.
>>I only wrote a little bit though today.
I got up at 6:30 in the morning; much earlier than when I usually wake up.
>>I got up at 6:30 in the morning, much earlier than the usual.
I had 5 classes from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m.
>>Correct
with only one hour break at lunch.
>>With only one hour break at lunch.
Is this an ideal campus life I imagined and dreamed during vacation?
>>Is this an ideal campus life that iimagined nad dreamed of during vacation?
I would say no, not exactly.
>>Correct.
I'm not sure whether I can handle my schedule of this semester well.
>>I뭢 not sure whether I can handle my shcedule this semester well.
Almost courses I take this semester seem too challenging to get good grades.
>>Almost all cousres I am taking this semester seems too challenging to get good grades.
Trying my best is the only one and can be the best option that I choose in this case.
>>Correct!
Wish me luck!
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