My first diary in English.

2011-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

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It was a little bit tough day. I got up at 6:30 in the morning; much earlier than when I usually wake up. I had 5 classes from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m. with only one hour break at lunch. Is this an ideal campus life I imagined and dreamed during vacation? I would say no, not exactly. I'm not sure whether I can handle my schedule of this semester well. Almost courses I take this semester seem too challenging to get good grades. Trying my best is the only one and can be the best option that I choose in this case. Wish me luck!

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear^^

Thank you so much for sending this composition. You can express yourself well in writing. I have corrected some sentences for you.

Have a nice day^^

My first diary in English.

>>correct

It was a little bit tough day.

>>I only wrote a little bit though today.

I got up at 6:30 in the morning; much earlier than when I usually wake up.

>>I got up at 6:30 in the morning, much earlier than the usual.

 I had 5 classes from 9 a.m. to 6 p.m.

>>Correct

with only one hour break at lunch.

>>With only one hour break at lunch.

Is this an ideal campus life I imagined and dreamed during vacation?

>>Is this an ideal campus life that iimagined nad dreamed of during vacation?

 I would say no, not exactly.

>>Correct.

I'm not sure whether I can handle my schedule of this semester well.

>>I뭢 not sure whether I can handle my shcedule this semester well.

Almost courses I take this semester seem too challenging to get good grades.

>>Almost all cousres I am taking this semester seems too challenging to get good grades.

Trying my best is the only one and can be the best option that I choose in this case.

>>Correct!

 Wish me luck!

>>correct

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