My first English Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher Kelly^^
I'm Anna.
I'll write something and this is my first writing in the Power English!
So I'm so excited!
Teacher's class is always very good
I'll study hard. Thank You.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, my dear Anna!^^
I am so happy to see your name in the composition board. Thank you for the nice comment. I always enjoy our class.
Keep up the good work!
~Kelly!^^
Hello, Teacher Kelly^^
>> Correct.
I\'m Anna.
>> Correct.
I\'ll write something and this is my first writing in the Power English!
>> I write something and it is my first composition here at Power English.
So I\'m so excited!
>> Correct.
Teacher\'s class is always very good.
>> Correct.
I\'ll study hard. Thank You.
>> Correct.
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