My First Essay About Morality
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Q)
Would you kill an innocent person if you thought it might mean saving a dozen other people?
A)
I would not kill an innocent person. It is true that we are living in a society where the interest of multiple people is more respected than that of individual one. However, the fact that something is agreed by most people does not always mean that it is right. Especially when it comes to dealing with a morality issue, we should be more careful not to recklessly involve economic principles in.
One's life is not something that can be measured with quantities and priorities. It is not right to make someone deprived of his or her life without their own free will. They don't have any duty to save others' life for a great cause. For that individual innocent person, just living a daily, boring and even awful life could be a better choice than a death with honor and recognition.
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Q) Would you kill an innocent person if you thought it might mean saving a dozen other people?>> CORRECTA)I would not kill an innocent person.
>> I will never kill an innocent person.
It is true that we are living in a society where the interest of multiple people is more respected than that of individual one.
>> It is true that we are living in a society where the interest of people is to be respected than to be helpful.
However, the fact that something is agreed by most people does not always mean that it is right.
>> However, the fact that something it is accepted by most of the people does not always mean that it is right.
Especially when it comes to dealing with a morality issue, we should be more careful not to recklessly involve economic principles in. >> CORRECTOne\'s life is not something that can be measured with quantities and priorities.
>> One\'s life is not something that can be measured in quantities and priorities.
It is not right to make someone deprived of his or her life without their own free will.
>> CORRECT
They don\'t have any duty to save others\' life for a great cause.
>> CORRECT
For that individual innocent person, just living a daily, boring and even awful life could be a better choice than a death with honor and recognition.
>> CORRECT
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