my first flying experience

2013-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I remember my first flying experience. it takes so long time. when i was a university student,i had gone to Russia (Moscow & saint-petersburg) it is very fantastic flying but so long. it takes 11 hour. At the beginning time, i surprised & worried but after some time i enjoyed good view & flying. But after few hour i was boring because of long flying time. so i slept & slept & slept Nevertheless, it was my pleasant experience.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort. You still did a great job. I\'ll see you in class. T.Ritchel   I remember my first flying experience. >>Correct it takes so long time. >>It was a long time ago. when i was a university student,i had gone to Russia (Moscow & saint-petersburg) it is very fantastic flying but so long. >>When I was still university student, I went to Russia (Moscow & St. Petersburg). It is a very fantastic experience but flying time took so long. it takes 11 hour. At the beginning time, i surprised & worried but after some time i enjoyed good view & flying. >>It takes 11 hours. At first, I was surprised & worried but after some time I enjoyed riding and sight seeing. But after few hour i was boring because of long flying time. >>But after few hours I was bored because of the long flying time. so i slept & slept & slept Nevertheless, it was my pleasant experience. >>So I just slept. Nevertheless, it was my pleasant experience.

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