my first guitar lesson
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Today is my first guitar lesson
>> Today is my first guitar lesson.
I learned how to play mi, si, sol.
>> I learned how to play the notes mi, si and sol.
It's was fun but my arms hurt a bit.
>> It was fun but my arms hurt a bit.
Guitar is very different from what it looks.
>> The guitar is more complicated compared to how it looks.
It's harder and complicated.
>> Correct
Also, my fingers get hurt. It need lots of work. Whew~!
>> Also, my fingers hurt from working hard.
I'm going to master guitar and play it in class special day or school trip.
>> I’m going to master the guitar and play it in a special day in class or on a school trip.
I hope I could continue my lessons for a long time.
>> I hope I could continue having lessons for a long time.
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