My first homework.

Hi, I'm [이름], i hope you to see my letters. Alice. (Last night, my heart was so, really throbbing with expection about first meeting with you. because i had never been experienced last time. like.. calling with foreigner friend, i supposed that i made some mistakes verbally. Anyway, i will take part in this program with you persistly. And, most of all, i'll enjoy this time as if i am a man wating for a date with his beautiful girlfriend. ha! ha!. i cannot forget your laughing broadly.) Sorry about rather long introduction. anyhow, let me introduce myself briefly. My name is [Name] Hun Park.( of course, from now on, i will be perfert [이름]) You know, i'm 23 years old. and now i'm a student in Myeon-gi university in Korea. In details, 2 years ago, i took a leave of absence for my military service and i'm plan to go to my school next year maybe... i have a problem though, it is about choice between going back to school and experiencing many things in Austrailia.

Hello there!

It was nice knowing you better through your composition.

I am so glad to have a student as driven as you.

Please review the corrections I made for you.

See you later!

-- Teacher Alice ^^ ---

Hi, I\'m [이름], i hope you to see my letters. Alice.

>>Hi, I\'m [이름]. I hope you can see my letters, Alice.
(Last night, my heart was so, really throbbing with expection about first meeting with you.

>>Last night, my heart was throbbing really fast while expecting my first meeting with you.

because i had never been experienced last time.

>>Because I had never experienced this before.

like.. calling with foreigner friend, i supposed that i made some mistakes verbally.

>>like calling a foreigner friend. I suppose I made some mistakes while speaking.

Anyway, i will take part in this program with you persistly.

>>Anyway, I will take part in this program with you persistently.

And, most of all, i\'ll enjoy this time as if i am a man wating for a date with his beautiful girlfriend. ha! ha!.

>>Correct.^^
i cannot forget your laughing broadly.)

>>I cannot forget you laughing so loud.
Sorry about rather long introduction.

>>Sorry for having a long introduction.

anyhow, let me introduce myself briefly.

>>Correct.
My name is [Name] Hun Park.

>>Correct.

( of course, from now on, i will be perfert [이름])
>>(Of course, from now on, I will prefer [이름].)

You know, i\'m 23 years old.

>>Correct.

and now i\'m a student in Myeon-gi university in Korea.

>>Correct.

In details, 2 years ago, i took a leave of absence for my military service and i\'m plan to go to my school next year maybe...

>>To put it in details, two years ago, I took a leave of absence for my military service and I\'m planning to go back to school next year maybe. 

i have a problem though, it is about choice between going back to school and experiencing many things in Austrailia.

>>I have a problem though. It is about choosing between going back to school or experiencing many things in Australia.