My first homework

2014-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I was enchanted to him. 2. She dozed in class so she was punished. 3. He likes to cuddle the cat. 4. Listening the music uplift my feeling 5. I have to elevate my grade

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Amy!

 

Thanks for making your homework!

I appreciate your effort. I just want to remind you to always put the correct punctuation mark at the end

of your sentence. You must also always observe subject-verb-agreement!

Overall, you did great!

 

See you tomorrow!

 

~Teacher Shanee

 

1. I was enchanted to him.

>>> I was enchanted by him.
2. She dozed in class so she was punished.

>>> Correct!
3. He likes to cuddle the cat.
>>> Correct!
4. Listening the music uplift my feeling
>>> Listening to music uplifts my feeling.
5. I have to elevate my grade

>>> I have to elevate my grade.

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