My first time experienced the earthquake

2017-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I experienced the earthquake for the first time when I was on a overpass. I felt that the bridge was just shaking by a lot of traffics. After taht , I recognized that It was an earthquake. It was my first time experienced earthqauke.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^_^

Happy Monday!


My country, the Philippines, is included in the ring of fire.

We\'ve experienced several strong quakes where many people died.

Anyway, thank you for sharing your experience.

I will see you later in class!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I experienced the earthquake for the first time when I was on a overpass.

>> I experienced earthquake for the first time when I was on an overpass.


I felt that the bridge was just shaking by a lot of traffics.

>> I felt that the bridge was shaking a lot.


After taht , I recognized that It was an earthquake.

>> After that, I realized that it was an earthquake.


It was my first time experienced earthquake.

>> It was my first time to experience earthquake.

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