My first time experienced the earthquake
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Good evening, [이름]!^_^
Happy Monday!
My country, the Philippines, is included in the ring of fire.
We\'ve experienced several strong quakes where many people died.
Anyway, thank you for sharing your experience.
I will see you later in class!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I experienced the earthquake for the first time when I was on a overpass.
>> I experienced earthquake for the first time when I was on an overpass.
I felt that the bridge was just shaking by a lot of traffics.
>> I felt that the bridge was shaking a lot.
After taht , I recognized that It was an earthquake.
>> After that, I realized that it was an earthquake.
It was my first time experienced earthquake.
>> It was my first time to experience earthquake.
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