My first vocal lesson
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 12 years old, I have a first vocal lesson. So my first vocal teacher met at 12 years old.
When I first saw her, she was so kind and soft.
And teach me, explain how to make a voice and every vocal skill.
I can\'t forget my first vocal teacher class.
Because that it\'s my first step in my music life.
I really really miss her.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Maybe you can still keep in touch with her! Try searching her social media accounts and meet sometimes. :)
When I was 12 years old, I have a first vocal lesson.
>> When I was 12 years old, I had my first vocal lesson.
So my first vocal teacher met at 12 years old.
>> So I met my first vocal teacher then.
When I first saw her, she was so kind and soft.
>> When I met her, she was so kind and soft.
And teach me, explain how to make a voice and every vocal skill.
>> She taught me how to practice my vocals.
I can\'t forget my first vocal teacher class.
>> I can\'t forget my first vocal teacher.
Because that it\'s my first step in my music life.
>> It is because it\'s my first step in my music career.
I really really miss her.
>> I really miss her.
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