My first vocal teacher:)
학생이 쓴 원문
My first vocal teacher.
When I was fourteen we were met each other first time.
I don\'t have any knowledge of vocal and she was very kind and nice to teach me.
And when I dropped at the audition everytime she take care my mind softly.
And I always thanks to her until now.
But now it\'s very after a long time I can\'t try to send message to her or call.
I\'ll try contect to her this chance:)
I\'m really really miss her.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Teachers who help us grow as people are responsible for imparting some of life\'s most important lessons. Though a teacher\'s influence on the social sphere of school lessens as students mature, those early lessons still have an effect on how they will interact with others in the future.
PS: I think it would be great if you keep in touch with her. She is so inspiring. :)
My first vocal teacher.
>> The teacher that inspired me the most is my first vocal teacher.
When I was fourteen we were met each other first time.
>> I met here when I was 14 years old.
I don\'t have any knowledge of vocal and she was very kind and nice to teach me.
>> I don\'t have any knowledge about vocalization at that time but she was still kind to teach me.
And when I dropped at the audition everytime she take care my mind softly.
>> Every time that I fail in an audition, she comforts me very gently.
And I always thanks to her until now.
>> I am always thankful for her until now.
But now it\'s very after a long time I can\'t try to send message to her or call.
>> But it has been a long time ago and I can\'t message nor call her.
I\'ll try contect to her this chance:)
>> I\'ll try to contact her when I have the chance.
I\'m really really miss her.
>> I really miss her.
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