My fitness goal in this year
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I will take pilates class all this year.
Because I want to correct my body shape.
Actually I have pain at left pelvis and waist because of imbalance on my body.
Also, when I have a time on July, I want to take swim class again.
Because the swim is a kind of aerobic exercise, I can strengthen my body.
강사 첨삭
Your fitness goal is very impressive, [이름]! ^^ Good luck and I know you can do it!
First, I will take pilates class all this year.
>> First, I will take a Pilates class this year.
Because I want to correct my body shape.>> I want to correct my body shape.
Actually I have pain at left pelvis and waist because of imbalance on my body.
>> Actually, I have pain in my left pelvis and waist because of an imbalance in my body.
Also, when I have a time on July, I want to take swim class again.
Actually I have pain at left pelvis and waist because of imbalance on my body.
>> Actually, I have pain in my left pelvis and waist because of an imbalance in my body.
Also, when I have a time on July, I want to take swim class again.
>> Also, when I have time in July, I want to take swim[이름]g class again
Because the swim is a kind of aerobic exercise, I can strengthen my body.
Because the swim is a kind of aerobic exercise, I can strengthen my body.
>> Swim[이름]g is a kind of aerobic exercise that can help strengthen my body.
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