my five facts~
학생이 쓴 원문
first, i\'m student.
second, i\'m twelve years old.
third,my English name is [이름]~
forth, my family is my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me!!
fifth, i\'m women~
i writting my five facts~ thank you!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Finally! You made your homework!
Finally! You made your homework!
That\'s great! Thank you so much for finding the time to do your homework. ^_^
first, i\'m student.
>> First, I\'m a student.
second, i\'m twelve years old.
>> Second, I\'m twelve years old.
third,my English name is [이름]~
>> Third, my English name is [이름].
forth, my family is my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me!!
>> Fourth, the members of my family is my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me.
fifth, i\'m women~
>> Fifth, I\'m a woman.
i writting my five facts~ thank you!!!
>> I wrote down five facts about me. Thank you.
>> First, I\'m a student.
second, i\'m twelve years old.
>> Second, I\'m twelve years old.
third,my English name is [이름]~
>> Third, my English name is [이름].
forth, my family is my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me!!
>> Fourth, the members of my family is my mom, my dad, my younger sister and me.
fifth, i\'m women~
>> Fifth, I\'m a woman.
i writting my five facts~ thank you!!!
>> I wrote down five facts about me. Thank you.
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