My fondest memories

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Here are my corrections for you:

My fondest memories when i childhood is to go fishing. 

>> My fondest memories from my childhood is when we went fishing. 

Actually I can\'t memories but I can feel. Because I saw my photo when I was 6 years old. 

>> Actually, I can\'t remember it well but I felt the happiness from a photo of a 6-year-old me.

I smiled and looked so happy in photo. 

>> I was smiling and I looked so happy in the photo.

My father was fishing, my mother hug me and my older sister and my yonger brother smiled.

>> My father was fishing, my mother was hugging me, and my older sister and my younger brother were also smiling.