My food
학생이 쓴 원문
I had math test on Wednesday.
But it was very difficult.
I don't think I did very well on my exams.
But I don’t really care about my grades.
I don’t believe good grades make me happy.
I will live a happy life, doing what I really enjoy.
I have become interested in cooking these days.
While searching for recipes to make lunch for my parents,
I found that there are so many interesting recipes!
My dream is not a chef,but it will be nice life.
I made instant noodles.
But,instant noodles wasn't really successful, though.
When,I made it,it was salty.
But my mom and dad said, "you made it good."
I will make other food!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! It\'s so great to know that you are doing what you really enjoy. Doing what you love and loving what you do is the key to a happy and successful life. I really hope that you will continue to discover your talent and skills. However, don\'t take your grades for granted because your performance at school plays a very important role in shaping your future. Do what you enjoy, but don\'t forget to do your tasks you\'re responsible for. Take care and I\'ll see you in class.
T. JanE ^^
I had math test on Wednesday.
>> I had Math test last Wednesday.But it was very difficult.>> Correct I don\'t think I did very well on my exams.>> Correct But I don\'t really care about my grades.>> Correct I don\'t believe good grades make me happy.>> Correct I will live a happy life, doing what I really enjoy.>> Correct I have become interested in cooking these days.>> Correct While searching for recipes to make lunch for my parents, I found that there are so many interesting recipes! >> While searching for recipes to make lunch for my parents, I found out that there are so many interesting recipes!My dream is not a chef,but it will be nice life.>> My dream is not to become a chef, but I think it will be a good job.I made instant noodles.>> Correct But,instant noodles wasn\'t really successful, though.>> It didn\'t really come out well, though.When I made it, it was salty.>> Correct But my mom and dad said, \"you made it good.\">> But my mom and dad said, \"You made it well.\"I will make other food!
>> Correct
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