My fortune!

2013-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

학생이 쓴 원문

I played cards with my brother! When I played cards, he said " I can tell your fortune!" And then he mixed the cards, and I chose 5 cards! They have "3,4,3,Q,K"! He said "You have 2 points! Same number is 3 and it has two! I think you will get common day!" Ha,,,, It's a marcy,,! If I get bad day, I cannot get a sleep... But I have common day~! Oh yes~~^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sarah!^^

I do encourage you to continue learning English.

One of the key factors is to have patience.

You brother sure is good.

Maybe he can also tell my future^^kkk...

It\'s good that your brother is not teasing you again. :p

See you later!

~~T. Heidi _^-^_

I played cards with my brother!

>>I played cards with my brother.

When I played cards, he said \" I can tell your fortune!\"

>>My brother said, \" I can tell your fortune!\"

>>>Or: My brother said, \"I can read your fortune!\"

And then he mixed the cards, and I chose 5 cards!

>>He shuffled the cards and he let me chose 5 cards.

They have \"3,4,3,Q,K\"!

>>I got \"3,4,3,Q,K!\"

He said \"You have 2 points! Same number is 3 and it has two!

>>Then he said \" You got 2 points!\" I got two 3\'s.

I think you will get common day!\"

>>I think you will have a normal day.

Ha,,,, It\'s a marcy,,! If I get bad day, I cannot get a sleep...

>>Ha! It\'s a mistake. I had a bad day and I couldn\'t sleep.

But I have common day~!

>>But I had a normal day.

Oh yes~~^^

>>Oh yes!^^

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