My free time

2019-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Louise

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually spend my free time watching Youtube these days. I watch some lectures for studying English and videos of popular singers. I think people can easily get addicted to Youtube because there are so many interesting contents. I’m also spending more and more time to watch those.

강사 첨삭

Writing Task: How do you usually spend your free time?

I usually spend my free time watching Youtube these days.
>> I usually spend my free time watching YouTube these days.

I watch some lectures for studying English and videos of popular singers. 
>> CORRECT! GOOD JOB!

I think people can easily get addicted to Youtube because there are so many interesting contents. 
>> I think people can easily get addicted to YouTube because there are so many interesting contents. 

I’m also spending more and more time to watch those.
>> CORRECT! GOOD JOB!


Hi [이름]! Thank You so much for answering your homework!  There were barely any mistakes!
Please keep on writing. It will help you practice and improve your sentence construction.
Til\' Next time! 
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Teacher Louise

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