My friend.

2010-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I meet my friend today. He is Korea pre-medi. school student. As we know, Yonsei and Korea Univ. are rival. He and I are best friend to each other but as student of Yonsei Univ, he is also my rival. It is really funny relationship. I have no doubt that this situation cannot breaks our friendship. Today, we have spent great time calling each other kitten and chick because Eagle is Yonsei Univ's mascot and Tiger is Korea's.

강사 첨삭

HI THERE AGAIN MR. [이름]! I HOPE YOU'RE READ THE FIRST COMPOSITION CORRECTION. KEEP READING AND PRACTICING THE PRONUNCIATION PATTERNS WE TACKLE EVERYDAY. YOU AND YOUR BESTFRIEND HAVE SUCH A WONDERFUL FRIENDSHIP. EVEN IF YOU KNOW THAT YOU'RE FROM RIVAL UNIVERSITIES, YOU STILL MAINTAIN YOUR FRIENDSHIP. I AM PRETTY SURE THAT IT WON'T RUIN YOUR RELATIONSHIP. JUST BE OPEN AND HONEST WITH EACH OTHER. AND ENJOY EACH OTHER'S COMPANY. A TIGER AND AN EAGLE, CAN BE  A VERY STRONG FORCE IF JOINED. WHY NOT BE AS ONE? HAVE A GREAT DAY! -Teacher VENUS - Review the following corrections of your grammar: I meet my friend today. He is Korea pre-medi. school student. As we know, Yonsei and Korea Univ. are rival. >> I met my friend today. He is a pre-med student from Korea University. As we know, Yonsei, my University and Korea University are rival schools. He and I are best friend to each other but as student of Yonsei Univ, he is also my rival. It is really funny relationship. >> He and I are bestfriends but as students of the said universities, we are also rivals. It is really a funny relationship. I have no doubt that this situation cannot breaks our friendship. >> I have no doubt that this situation will not break our friendship. Today, we have spent great time calling each other kitten and chick because Eagle is Yonsei Univ's mascot and Tiger is Korea's. >> Today, we had a great time calling each other kitten and chick because Yonsie University's mascot is an eagle and a tiger for Korea University.

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