My friend is from Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Why does the main character begin to write to the Korean girl?
Because shes her penpel.
2.Where do the two pen pals live?
She live in Korea.
3.What word or words in paragraph one let the reader know what a “pen pal” is?
I wrote to her and she wrote back
4.What do the two pen pals have in common?
they both like to eat.
5.What do the main character’s parents do to help him/her become more familiar with Korean things?
They took her to a asian festival.
6.How can the reader tell that the two pen pals know what each other looks like?
Because they saw each other at the asian festival.
7.How do you think the two pen pals feel about each other?
I think they feel good about each other.
8.What was the main character surprised to find out? Why do you think he/she was surprised?
I think she was surised about the language, because I think she wants to speak it too.
강사 첨삭
1.Why does the main character begin to write to the Korean girl?
Because shes her penpel.
Because shes her penpel.
>>> Because his class decided to find a pen pal from another country.
2.Where do the two pen pals live?
She live in Korea.
2.Where do the two pen pals live?
She live in Korea.
>>> The author is from America and her pen pal is from Korea.
3.What word or words in paragraph one let the reader know what a “pen pal” is?
I wrote to her and she wrote back
3.What word or words in paragraph one let the reader know what a “pen pal” is?
I wrote to her and she wrote back
>>> correct
4.What do the two pen pals have in common?
they both like to eat.
4.What do the two pen pals have in common?
they both like to eat.
>>> They both like their family. They both like to eat, especially desserts. They even have the same favorite song.
5.What do the main character’s parents do to help him/her become more familiar with Korean things?
They took her to a asian festival.
5.What do the main character’s parents do to help him/her become more familiar with Korean things?
They took her to a asian festival.
>>> They took her to an Asian festival.
6.How can the reader tell that the two pen pals know what each other looks like?
Because they saw each other at the asian festival.
Because they saw each other at the asian festival.
>>> They sent each other their pictures.
7.How do you think the two pen pals feel about each other?
I think they feel good about each other.
7.How do you think the two pen pals feel about each other?
I think they feel good about each other.
>>> OR: They like to spend time getting to know each other.
8.What was the main character surprised to find out? Why do you think he/she was surprised?
I think she was surised about the language, because I think she wants to speak it too.
8.What was the main character surprised to find out? Why do you think he/she was surprised?
I think she was surised about the language, because I think she wants to speak it too.
>>> She was surprised upon knowing her pen pal\'s favorite song because it is also her favorite.
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