My friend Jeannie.

Yesterday, I met my friend named Jeannie. She was really tall like my mother!!! I didn't really believe that she was tall. Also she's been to Australia to study english. When she went our house,We played 'Children's english camp'. So, Jeannie and I was teachers, my sister was a student. We had lots of fun. This play looked like a 'Family play'. Then My sister went to bed, Jeannie and I watched a movie named 'Incredibles'. This movie was about a super hero family. While we were watching movie, Jeannie's mom and my mom came to our house. Then Jeannie left.

It sounds like you really had fun with this friend of yours!^^ It's really refreshing to hear kids like you having fun. After all, children shouldn't miss out on the joys of your age.-Teacher JM  Yesterday, I met my friend named Jeannie. >>>Correct^^She was really tall like my mother!!! >>>She was really as tall as my mother!!!I didn't really believe that she was tall. >>>Correct^^Also she's been to Australia to study english. >>>She's been to Australia to study English.When she went our house,We played 'Children's english camp'. >>>When she went to our house, we played 'Children's english camp'.So, Jeannie and I was teachers, my sister was a student. >>>In the game, Jeannie and I acted as teachers while my sister was the student.We had lots of fun. >>>Correct^^This play looked like a 'Family play'. >>>Correct^^Then My sister went to bed, Jeannie and I watched a movie named 'Incredibles'.  >>>When my sister went to bed, Jeannie and I watched a movie named 'Incredibles'. This movie was about a super hero family. >>>Correct^^ While we were watching movie, Jeannie's mom and my mom came to our house. >>>While we were watching the movie, Jeannie's mom and my mom came to our house.Then Jeannie left. >>>Correct^^