my friend\'s new cafe
학생이 쓴 원문
I dropped by my friend\'s new cafe on my way home. Since it was the weekend, the place was packed with customers. She was running the whole place alone and I could see how hectic it was - so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
I spent about three hours straight washing dishes and getting ingredients ready.
It was definitely tiring, but I was happy I could help out.
I felt proud of helping her, and I was grateful to be part of such an important moment in her new beginning.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It really shows the kind of friend you are: thoughtful, supportive, and ready to act without hesitation. Jumping in to help, especially when things are chaotic, takes a lot of empathy and selflessness. Three hours of nonstop work isn’t easy, but I can imagine how meaningful it must’ve felt to be there for your friend during such a big step in her life.
-T. Sonny
I dropped by my friend\'s new cafe on my way home.
>>Correct!
Since it was the weekend, the place was packed with customers.
>>Correct!
She was running the whole place alone and I could see how hectic it was - so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
>>She was running the entire place by herself, and I could see how hectic it was, so I jumped in to help without thinking twice.
I spent about three hours straight washing dishes and getting ingredients ready.
I spent about three hours straight washing dishes and getting ingredients ready.
>>I spent about three straight hours washing dishes and preparing ingredients.
It was definitely tiring, but I was happy I could help out.
It was definitely tiring, but I was happy I could help out.
>>Correct!
I felt proud of helping her, and I was grateful to be part of such an important moment in her new beginning.
I felt proud of helping her, and I was grateful to be part of such an important moment in her new beginning.
>>Correct!
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