My Friend Sue
학생이 쓴 원문
My best is friend Sue.
She meets me on every TUEsday.
She loughs all day.
Sue likes to draw.
She likes to drink with straws.
Sue can be a little cheeky sometimes however,
May our friendship last forever...
강사 첨삭
Hi there Emma!^_^
Happy Wednesday!:)
May your friendship with Sue last for a long time if not forever.^_-
Thank you for telling me about her. I think she\'s a nice girl, too. Be good to each other. A real friend is a treasure, okay?^_^//
Thank you so much for this composition. You did a good job indeed!:)
~T. Mayleen~
My best is friend Sue.
>> Correct!
OR: Sue is my best friend.
She meets me on every TUEsday.
>> We meet every Tuesday.
She loughs all day.
>> She\'d laugh all day.
OR: She laughs a lot.
Sue likes to draw.
>> Correct!
She likes to drink with straws.
>> Correct!
Sue can be a little cheeky sometimes however,
>> However, she can be a little cheeky sometimes.
May our friendship last forever...
>> Correct!
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