My Friend Sue

2016-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My best is friend Sue. She meets me on every TUEsday. She loughs all day. Sue likes to draw. She likes to drink with straws. Sue can be a little cheeky sometimes however, May our friendship last forever...

강사 첨삭

Hi there Emma!^_^ Happy Wednesday!:)   May your friendship with Sue last for a long time if not forever.^_- Thank you for telling me about her. I think she\'s a nice girl, too. Be good to each other. A real friend is a treasure, okay?^_^// Thank you so much for this composition. You did a good job indeed!:)   ~T. Mayleen~   My best is friend Sue. >> Correct! OR: Sue is my best friend. She meets me on every TUEsday. >> We meet every Tuesday. She loughs all day. >> She\'d laugh all day. OR: She laughs a lot. Sue likes to draw. >> Correct! She likes to drink with straws. >> Correct! Sue can be a little cheeky sometimes however, >> However, she can be a little cheeky sometimes. May our friendship last forever... >> Correct!

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