my friends
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강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Paul, nice composition about Friends!^^
Im glad to hear that you have a lot of friends in your school, but you should also choose your friends okay?;0)
Anyway, here are the corrections from your composition.I hope it will help you..
~T.Cam
i think that there are 3 types about my friend.
>>I think there are 3 types/kinds of friend
one is very close friends. it is similar with best friends.
>>correct!
i can trust my close friends and i can talk about my secret.
>>correct!
>>I can trust my close friends and likewise tell them about my secrets-better
the others are just friends.
>>correct
>>The others are just my acquaintance
finally , there are some hate friend. they make me mad(angry).
>>Finally, my enemies who usually make me so mad.
sometimes they bothering and teasing me .
>>Sometimes they bother and tease me
my friend named kim-ji-ho behave frivolously.
>>My friend named Kim Ji Ho behaves frivolously
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