My friends came home
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I you had fun with your friends! ^_^
Is ramen your favorite food?
I\'m happy that you were not hungry in class today. kkk
See you on Tuesday!
Good night!
_Teacher Dianne
My friends came my home.
>> My friends came to my home.
>> or: My friends came to my house.
They said my house was really cleaned.
>> They said my house was really clean.
We played piano and went outside to play baseball.
>> We played the piano and went outside to play baseball.
It was really cold but we went to park and play baseball.Then,we went to seven eleven store and ate ramen with tropicana.
>> It was really cold, but we went to a park and played baseball. Then, we went to seven eleven, which is a convenience store and ate ramen with Tropicana juice.
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