My future
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be a pharmacist.
Pharmacists had a dream because it was cool to make medicine.
I want to make medicine.
And I like to care of pepole.
강사 첨삭
Hi Hi [이름]!^^
Pharmacists had a dream because it was cool to make medicine.
I want to make medicine.
And I like to care of pepole.
Your future is bright!
I hope you will be a successful pharmacist in the future.
Good luck!
Teacher Andrea
I want to be a pharmacist.
>> Correct
Pharmacists had a dream because it was cool to make medicine.
>> I dreamed of becoming a pharmacist because it is cool to make medicine.
I want to make medicine.
>> Correct
And I like to care of pepole.
>> I also want to treat people.
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