my future

2010-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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i'm so sorry. I got up late....... my future. i'd like to do many things now. I think twenties is to set my goals. I have not thought about my future distinctly. but to be honest with you, I seem that I have ambition... so, I wanna study hard. but I was aware I'm not genius. it's very sad. our happiness depends on our focusing. my happiness is to abroad to be a nurse. whenever I study english, I am happy. and also I am happy with you. my futre is that I will not be a shamed nurse.

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Hi there Tracy, No problem! I understand that you woke up late that's why you have to wake up late too. Nonetheless, I'm grateful that you took the call. I'm happy that you are my student. I can feel that you really work hard to improve. I know that you will achive your goal because of that. See you tomorrow!   i'm so sorry. I got up late....... >> Correctmy future.>> Correcti'd like to do many things now. I think twenties is to set my goals. >>CorrectI have not thought about my future distinctly. >> Correctbut to be honest with you, I seem that I have ambition... >> Correctso, I wanna study hard. but I was aware I'm not genius. it's very sad. >>So, I wanna study hard but I'm aware I'm not genius. It's very sad.our happiness depends on our focusing. >> our happiness depends on our focus. my happiness is to abroad to be a nurse. >> my happiness is to go abroad and to be a nurse. whenever I study english, I am happy. and also I am happy with you. >>Correctmy futre is that I will not be a shamed nurse. >>my futre is that I will not be a shy nurse.

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