my future
학생이 쓴 원문
i'm so sorry. I got up late.......
my future.
i'd like to do many things now. I think twenties is to set my goals.
I have not thought about my future distinctly.
but to be honest with you, I seem that I have ambition...
so, I wanna study hard. but I was aware I'm not genius. it's very sad.
our happiness depends on our focusing.
my happiness is to abroad to be a nurse.
whenever I study english, I am happy. and also I am happy with you.
my futre is that I will not be a shamed nurse.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tracy,
No problem! I understand that you woke up late that's why you have to wake up late too. Nonetheless, I'm grateful that you took the call. I'm happy that you are my student.
I can feel that you really work hard to improve. I know that you will achive your goal because of that. See you tomorrow!
i'm so sorry. I got up late....... >> Correctmy future.>> Correcti'd like to do many things now. I think twenties is to set my goals.
>>CorrectI have not thought about my future distinctly.
>> Correctbut to be honest with you, I seem that I have ambition...
>> Correctso, I wanna study hard. but I was aware I'm not genius. it's very sad.
>>So, I wanna study hard but I'm aware I'm not genius. It's very sad.our happiness depends on our focusing.
>> our happiness depends on our focus. my happiness is to abroad to be a nurse.
>> my happiness is to go abroad and to be a nurse. whenever I study english, I am happy. and also I am happy with you.
>>Correctmy futre is that I will not be a shamed nurse.
>>my futre is that I will not be a shy nurse.
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