My future plan.

2010-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Though it is already the end of this year, I have a plan for this year. My future plan is getting a higher grade in OPIC test. Now I have an intermediate mid level. and I want to get an I.H level. I want to move to other department which I don't have to work in shifts in. That's why I keep studying English. After getting an I.H level, I will try to get some license which helps me accomplish my dream.

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Hi [이름], Like the usual cases, your writing skill is very good.. No further corrections noted.. Just continue what youre doing and I know you will be much better in no time... Likewise, getting the score you want in OPIC is not a problem.. I do believe that you can do that.. Talk to you later my dear.. T.Cam   Though it is already the end of this year, I have a plan for this year. >>correct!My future plan is getting a higher grade in OPIC test. >>correct! >>My future plan is to get a high score in OPIC test.Now I have an intermediate mid level. >>correct!and I want to get an I.H level. >>correct!I want to move to other department which I don't have to work in shifts in. >>I want to move to other department wherein I don't have to work in shifts.That's why I keep studying English. >>correct!After getting an I.H level, I will try to get some license which helps me accomplish my dream. >>correct!

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