My future plan.
학생이 쓴 원문
Though it is already the end of this year, I have a plan for this year.
My future plan is getting a higher grade in OPIC test.
Now I have an intermediate mid level.
and I want to get an I.H level.
I want to move to other department which I don't have to work in shifts in.
That's why I keep studying English.
After getting an I.H level, I will try to get some license which helps me accomplish my dream.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Like the usual cases, your writing skill is very good..
No further corrections noted..
Just continue what youre doing and I know you will be much better in no time...
Likewise, getting the score you want in OPIC is not a problem..
I do believe that you can do that..
Talk to you later my dear..
T.Cam
Though it is already the end of this year, I have a plan for this year.
>>correct!My future plan is getting a higher grade in OPIC test.
>>correct!
>>My future plan is to get a high score in OPIC test.Now I have an intermediate mid level.
>>correct!and I want to get an I.H level.
>>correct!I want to move to other department which I don't have to work in shifts in.
>>I want to move to other department wherein I don't have to work in shifts.That's why I keep studying English.
>>correct!After getting an I.H level, I will try to get some license which helps me accomplish my dream.
>>correct!
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