My goal
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Johnny!
Thank you for making your homework. I have some corrections for you, and if ever my corrections mean different from what you wanted to say, please feel free to discuss it with me tomorrow. Anyway, I do know that you'd be able to fulfill this dream of yours. Just believe in yourself as much as I believe in you. Take care, Johnny! See you!
-Louise-
In a school, My goal is getting a guide job for tour. Because I like to meet some people in my life.
>> In school, my goal is to learn how to get a tourist guide job because I like to meet various people in my lifetime.
This is so close to my dream.So I wish I will get it.
>> This is a dream I can actually pursue, so I am hoping to reach it.
and I want to make it happy with the people.
>> Also, I want to make people happy.
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