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I want to go to study abroad especially U.S. I want to take a master’s degree and Ph.D. degree in Public Policy course. Kennedy school in Harvard and Maxwell school in Syracuse are well known as their Public Policy courses. It is almost impossible for me to enter those prominent schools. First of all, I have to get really good scores at TOFLE and GRE tests. I know that it will be very difficult for me. Another problem is that they require extremely high education fees. I have to earn a lot of money to afford them. If I work as a public administrator more than 5 years, however, the government will support my education fees. It will be great! Although I’m not good at English now, I’ll try to study hard. I think that I can reach the goal someday if I do my best.

Hello [이름]! Just do your best so you will achieve your goal. Remember, education never stops. I know you can do it. T.Faye Here are some corrections:  I want to go to study abroad especially U.S. >>I want to go and study abroad especially in the U.S.I want to take a master’s degree and Ph.D. degree in Public Policy course. >> I want to take a master’s degree and Ph.D in Public Policy course.Kennedy school in Harvard and Maxwell school in Syracuse are well known as their Public Policy courses. >>Kennedy school in Harvard and Maxwell school in Syracuse are well known for their Public Policy courses.It is almost impossible for me to enter those prominent schools. >>Correct!First of all, I have to get really good scores at TOFLE and GRE tests. >>Correct. >>Correct spelling: TOEFLI know that it will be very difficult for me. >>Correct.Another problem is that they require extremely high education fees. >>Another problem is that, they require extremely high tuition fees.I have to earn a lot of money to afford them. >> Correct.If I work as a public administrator more than 5 years, however, the government will support my education fees. >>If I will work as a public administrator for more than 5 years, the government will finance my education.It will be great! >>Correct! Although I’m not good at English now, I’ll try to study hard. >>Correct.I think that I can reach the goal someday if I do my best. >> Correct. >> I think that I can reach/achieve my goal someday if I do my best.