My goal for 2012
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very unhappy with the result of 2011
I always think that I will do better and better but I am very disappointed because of the bad decision.
I think the most important thing is the ability and capability of me.
but the important matter is human relationship in korea.
I just realized that personal ability is not the matter when someone is evaluated.
I think the most important part is that which university, which family someone has.
So kangnam wives they urged thier sons or daughters go to the famous university.
In my case I graduated from the canadian university and Idon't have much relationship with someone who work with me.
If I don't have any relathionship with my superior people. then I hace to do entertain them for my promotion.
I hate to do this thing and I will achive my goal by myself.
I will keep that in mind and I will be sustainable and agilant for all the things.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr.[이름]!!! I truly appreciate your positivity about your future. Just always keep the faith Mr.[이름]. I will always pray for your success. May you have a good start for the year 2012. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
I am very unhappy with the result of 2011
>> CorrectI always think that I will do better and better but I am very disappointed because of the bad decision.>> CorrectI think the most important thing is the ability and capability of me.
>> Correctbut the important matter is human relationship in korea.>> But the most important matter in Korea is human relationship.I just realized that personal ability is not the matter when someone is evaluated.>> CorrectI think the most important part is that which university, which family someone has.
>> CorrectSo kangnam wives they urged thier sons or daughters go to the famous university.>> So wives from Kangnam urged their sons or daughters to enter a famous university.In my case I graduated from the canadian university and Idon\'t have much relationship with someone who work with me.>> CorrectIf I don\'t have any relathionship with my superior people. then I hace to do entertain them for my promotion. >> If I don\'t have any connection with my superiors then I have to entertain them for my promotion.I hate to do this thing and I will achive my goal by myself.>> CorrectI will keep that in mind and I will be sustainable and agilant for all the things.
>> Correct
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