My goal in class
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to talk naturally in english, write, read.
I want to study hard for a years.
Next years, i\'m going to study more in the pilippines.
The period of study is in two months.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ashley!
Thank you for your composition.
I hope you practice more with the other questions that I will give.
You express yourself well.
This will be a good opportunity for you to improve.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to talk naturally in english, write, read.>> I want to speak, write and read more naturally in English.
I want to study hard for a years.
I want to study hard for a years.
>> I want to study hard for a year.
Next years, i\'m going to study more in the pilippines.
Next years, i\'m going to study more in the pilippines.
>> I\'m going to study English more in the Philippines.
The period of study is in two months.
The period of study is in two months.
>> I hope to study for two months.
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