My goal is making much money.

2018-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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I always persuit this target. To making much money. And I like kakao talk apps most. As people saying goes, Time is money. I like money. And girl the second and third is power. These That I mentioned is actually a the name of book which wrote by business chair man. I am very eager to make money even when I was young. I do not know exactly why I had been so. Maybe my circumstance makes me so. But even now I am playing at home not working. I was eager to buy toys when I was young. But I had no money. so I demolished everything around that I can see . I am a disable man. I have been to mental hospital. It is partly because of college entrance problem. Thanks for reading. I would better to stop my excuse.

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I always persuit this target. To making much money.
And I like kakao talk apps most.
As people saying goes, Time is money.
I like money. And girl the second and third is power.
These That I mentioned is actually a the name of book which wrote by business chair man.
I am very eager to make money even when I was young.
I do not know exactly why I had been so. Maybe my circumstance makes me so. But even now I am playing at home not working.
I was eager to buy toys when I was young. But I had no money. so I demolished everything around that I can see . I am a disable man. I have been to mental hospital. It is partly because of college entrance problem.
Thanks for reading. I would better to stop my excuse.


My goals have changed from the simplest to biggest ones as time went by. I always pursuit of earning much money. As people say, time is money, time is gold. Secondly, I wanted to have (a girl)? you meant girlfriend/ wife? and the third is power. I don\'t know exactly why I wanted to earn more money/ to become rich, maybe because of my circumstances. However, I just stayed at home and not working. When I was young, I was eager to buy toys but I did not have enough money. So I demolished everything around me.


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