My good choices
학생이 쓴 원문
What influences you to make good choices?
Reliable people influences me to make good choices. That reliable people will be my friends, family, co-worker, celebrity, and so on. But the person who make the final choice is me. I think much time when I make a choice. It is hard to think honestly, but I consider many advice of reliable people and it can be good choices.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting this homework.
It is good to know that you are being influenced by reliable people.
I totally agree that listening to their advice is really good and helpful but of course, the final choice will always be with us. ^^
I hope that you will keep on making good choices in life. ^^
~Teacher Gina
Reliable people influences me to make good choices.
>> Reliable people influence me to make good choices.
That reliable people will be my friends, family, co-worker, celebrity, and so on.
>> Those reliable people will be my friends, family, co-worker, celebrity, and so on.
But the person who make the final choice is me.
>> CORRECT.
I think much time when I make a choice.
>> I think for a long time when I make a choice.
>> Or: It takes much time when I make a choice.
It is hard to think honestly, but I consider many advice of reliable people and it can be good choices.
>> It is hard to think honestly, but I consider many advice from reliable people and they can be good choices.
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