My goodness and weakness
학생이 쓴 원문
I think,I'm a very kind person,because I usually deal with other people kindly without any problems, and that make me happy. Because I like people. And I always do my best in my field,because I want to make a good result.Also because of this, I was extolled by other people like co-worker. And my weakness is that I'm not a active person,I think it isn't badness, but sometimes it interrupt me whenever I have to do some active work.I need some correction, in my opinion.But I love me so much.And I try to make me more good person.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Wow, this is a very candid one. Well I think we have some similarities except of course I’m an active person. I am outgoing,,
We’ll discuss more about of it in class.
See you tonight,
Connie
I think,I'm a very kind person,because I usually deal with other people kindly without any problems, and that make me happy.
>> I think I’m a very kind person, because I usually deal with other people kindly without any problems, and that makes me happy.
Because I like people. And I always do my best in my field,because I want to make a good result.
>> It is because I like dealing with people, I always do my best in this field because I want to make a good result.
Also because of this, I was extolled by other people like co-worker.
>> I also received praises from other people like my co-workers.
And my weakness is that I'm not a active person,I think it isn't badness, but sometimes it interrupt me whenever I have to do some active work.
>> My weakness is that I’m not an active person, I think this is bad because it hinders me when I have to do active works.
I need some correction, in my opinion.But I love me so much.And I try to make me more good person.
>> I need more improvements in my opinion I love my self so I will try to be a better person.
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