My gorgeous weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
At the evening of saturday, my cousin,anuts,uncle, grandma and grandpa came to visit our house.We ate dinner at Chinise restraunt which was spectacular.The food was scrumptious.We played and went tothe other peoples room. It was fantastic.We came home then we watched the `thor` movie.We slept about ten to twelve.
I woke at seven o`clock. we ate our breakfast and to play football.The groud was really wet.So we came in. We went tothe lake park.It has been an amazing weekend.
I can't wait until i meet my cousin again.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Min!:)
Happy Monday!
Thank you so much for sharing with me your amazing weekend. You described things in a way that I could actually visualize it in my mind.
I\'m glad that you had fun and like you, I hope you\'ll get to spend more memorable moments with your relatives because when you grow older, these experiences will help cheer you up and will give you strength in times of challenge^___^
I\'ll look forward to our neet class. See you!:)
~Teacher Mayleen
My gorgeous weekend
>> My Gorgeous Weekend
At the evening of saturday, my cousin,anuts,uncle, grandma and grandpa came to visit our house.
>> Last Saturday night, my cousin, aunts, unclem grandma, and grandpa came to visit at our house.
We ate dinner at Chinise restraunt which was spectacular.
>> We ate dinner in a Chinese restaurant which was spectacular.
The food was scrumptious.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> The food was delectable.
We played and went tothe other peoples room.
>> We played and checked other people\'s rooms.
It was fantastic.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> It was really fantastic.
We came home then we watched the `thor` movie.
>> When we came home, we watched the \"Thor\" movie.
We slept about ten to twelve.
>> It was 10minutes before 12 midnight when we went to bed.
I woke at seven o`clock.
>> I woke up at seven o\'clock.
we ate our breakfast and to play football.
>> We ate our breakfast then we decided to play football.
The groud was really wet.So we came in.
>> The ground was really wet so we went back in.
We went tothe lake park.
>> We also went to the lake park.
It has been an amazing weekend.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> It was an amazing weekend.
I can\'t wait until i meet my cousin again.
>> I can\'t wait to meet with my cousin again.
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