My grandmother came to my house.

2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Tommorrow is my grandmother's birthday.So,my grandmother came to my home.I will buy a cheese cake for my grandmother.We will celebrate my grandmother's birthday on Saturday.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Please greet your grandmother for me. ^^ Buying a cheese cake, it\'s so sweet of you. Your grandmother will surely be happy with your present. Enjoy your grandmother\'s birthday on Saturday! Good night and have a happy weekend! _Teacher Dianne Tommorrow is my grandmother\'s birthday.So,my grandmother came to my home. >> Tomorrow is my grandmother\'s birthday so, my grandmother came to our home. I will buy a cheese cake for my grandmother. >> correct We will celebrate my grandmother\'s birthday on Saturday. >> correct

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