My grandmother's house┏√守───━

2014-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I visited my grandmother's house. It's fun. It was very good to me. I watched the tv. I like it My sister like to watch tv. My sister is watch a animation. I can't understand. My sister isn't child. But she want to watched a tv. Bye

강사 첨삭

I think almost everybody likes watching TV. That is the reason why your sister likes it too. Not only children who love watching TV but adults too. Anyway, thank you for sharing me about this Mike. It made me smile and I appreciate it. Have a good night! -Teacher Chloe I visited my grandmother\'s house. >>Correct!It\'s fun. >>It was fun. It was very good to me. >>Correct!I watched the tv. >>I watched TV.I like it >>I liked it. My sister like to watch tv. >>My sister likes watching TV. My sister is watch a animation. >>My sister watches animation.I can\'t understand. >>I don\'t understand. My sister isn\'t child. >>My sister isn\'t a child anymore.But she want to watched a tv. >>But she likes watching TV.Bye >>Goodbye!

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