My Greatest Dream.
학생이 쓴 원문
My greatest dream is to be a someone who can love me.
I hope to love myself without comparing other people.
then, I can love and enjoy my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for taking some time to answer your homework. I really appreciate that you shared your greatest dream to me. I think I also have the same dream as what you have. (^^,) See you in our class! have a good day!
My greatest dream is to be a someone who can love me.
>>> My greatest dream is to be a person who can love myself completely.
I hope to love myself without comparing other people.
>>> I hope to love myself without comparing it with other people.
then, I can love and enjoy my life.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR Then, I can also love other people and enjoy my life.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
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