My gulity pleasure
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My gulity pleasure is eating. I should always keep my body slim, but I really love eating. I often regret after eating but I can’t stop it. Eating is the only one that can relieve my stress. Maybe I should exercise hard to eat what I want.
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My gulity pleasure is eating.
>> My guilty pleasure is eating.
I should always keep my body slim, but I really love eating.
>>CORRECT
I often regret after eating but I can’t stop it.
>>CORRECT
Eating is the only one that can relieve my stress.
>> Eating is the only thing that can relieve my stress.
Maybe I should exercise hard to eat what I want.
>> Maybe I should exercise harder so that I can eat what I want.
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