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Our health system was not prepared for Ebola. And Ebola that surveillance system did not actually address the issue of Ebola or capture the issue of Ebola. And so they surveillanced diseases such as yellow fever, acute flaccid paralysis, neonatal death, neonatal tetanus. And so when Ebola hit, because the surveillance system was not
strengthened to detect Ebola, theye had a problem. Ebola went through the society. But then they kind of reorganized theirselvles through the Ministry of Health. And they\'re doing this in partner-- they started
to rebuild and restrengthen the health system in the midst of the emergency. And so they started to establish ETUs, Ebola Treatment Units, first in Monrovia.
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Our health system was not prepared for Ebola.
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And Ebola that surveillance system did not actually address the issue of Ebola or capture the issue of Ebola. And so they surveillanced diseases such as yellow fever, acute flaccid paralysis, neonatal death, neonatal tetanus. And so when Ebola hit, because the surveillance system was not strengthened to detect Ebola, theye had a problem.
>> And the monitoring system did not actually address the issue about Ebola nor did it stop the problem. They monitored diseases such as yellow fever, acute flaccid paralysis, neonatal tetanus and the causes of neonatal death but when Ebola appeared, they had a problem because the monitoring system was not strengthened.
Ebola went through the society. But then they kind of reorganized theirselvles through the Ministry of Health. And they\'re doing this in partner-- they started to rebuild and restrengthen the health system in the midst of the emergency. And so they started to establish ETUs, Ebola Treatment Units, first in Monrovia.
>> Therefore Ebola spread to the communities. On the other hand, they reorganized themselves and cooperated with the Ministry of Health. They started to rebuild and strengthen the healthcare system amidst the emergency situation, and so they started to establish ETUs or Ebola Treatment Units first in Monrovia.
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