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2020-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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1. I learn about identify the clinical features of Ebola Virus Disease (EVD). I thinking about the risk assessment as it relates to the selection of personal protective equipment (PPE). And I now about the differences between donning and doffing. Finally, I recognized the lessons learned from providing care to Ebola patients in the United States. 2. I was learned about the clinical laboratory considerations for Ebola Virus Disease. I know the differentiation between persons under investigation and persons with confirmed EVD. And I did searching for where and how EVD laboratory testing is performed. Finally I recognize the safety concerns surrounding the disposal of specimens and human remains. today,, i will... upload a lot of assay,,, i am so sorry... ㅠㅠ..but you can fix my essay when you have enough time!! :) !

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
No worries, I enjoy reading your essays anyway because I am learning as well. They are informative, so thanks for sharing. ^ ^
-Rachel
 1. I learn about identify the clinical features of Ebola Virus Disease (EVD).
>> I learned about identifying the clinical features of the Ebola Virus Disease (EVD). 
 I thinking about the risk assessment as it relates to the selection of personal protective equipment (PPE). And I now about the differences between donning and doffing. 
>> It made me think about the risk assessment as it relates to the selection of Personal Protective Equipment (PPE), and it made me know the differences between donning and doffing. 
Finally, I recognized the lessons learned from providing care to Ebola patients in the United States.
>> Finally, I can recognize the lessons learned from providing care to Ebola patients in the United States. 

2. I was learned about the clinical laboratory considerations for Ebola Virus Disease.
>> I also learned about the clinical laboratory considerations for Ebola Virus Disease. 
I know the differentiation between persons under investigation and persons with confirmed EVD. 
>> I learned how to differentiate persons under investigation and persons with confirmed EVD.
And I did searching for where and how EVD laboratory testing is performed. 
>> And I did a research about where and how EVD laboratory testing is performed. 
Finally I recognize the safety concerns surrounding the disposal of specimens and human remains.
>> correct

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