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While listening to the lecture, I thought they was really great, and I wondered if I could do it like them. I was wanted to study immunology because of covid-19 which was the pandemic in 2020 and my major was biotechnology. And then, I was learned about Ebola in COSERA. Before I study, I really didn’t know about the Ebola disease. I know about just that disease is very dangerous. But after the lesson, I knew about the history that is The Ebola root and how the name was called. Also, I know about the how the important environment for treat disease. I have a time to thinking about a lot of victims. I learned how important it is to study and develop medicine to cure it. It also made me want to study more about why the disease occurs and its detailed mechanisms. It was good that I could learn the field that I was interested in through other schools.
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Finally, I\'ve reached the end of the class about Ebola. I think I learned something about the virus too. ^ ^
-Rachel
While listening to the lecture, I thought they was really great, and I wondered if I could do it like them.
>> correct (we just say, they were really great instead of was great)
I was wanted to study immunology because of covid-19 which was the pandemic in 2020 and my major was biotechnology.
>> I\'ve always wanted to study immunology because of covid-19 the pandemic that hit this year and because my major is biotechnology.
And then, I was learned about Ebola in COSERA.
>> And then I learned about Ebola through CO SERA.
Before I study, I really didn’t know about the Ebola disease. I know about just that disease is very dangerous.
>> Before I studied, I really didn\'t know much about the Ebola disease. I just know that it is very dangerous.
But after the lesson, I knew about the history that is The Ebola root and how the name was called.
>> But after the lesson, I learned about the history of Ebola, how it originated and why it was called such.
Also, I know about the how the important environment for treat disease.
>> Also, I learned about the importance of the environment in treating the disease.
I have a time to thinking about a lot of victims. I learned how important it is to study and develop medicine to cure it.
>> I had time to think about a lot of victims and I realized how important it is to study and develop medicine to cure them.
It also made me want to study more about why the disease occurs and its detailed mechanisms. It was good that I could learn the field that I was interested in through other schools.
>> correct
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