My habby

2020-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi.! My habbies are play golf and table tennis. But these days I am afraid of corona so I am never playing outdoorsports. These days I usually walk on the mountain, walk apartment in the around. Anyway I have a new good habby for healty. Also I am studying hard English. I think this is a good habby. Bye bye .....

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. I am happy to know that you enjoy learning the language. See you in our class.

- T. Gabby

My habby

>> My hobby.

Hi.!

>> Hi!
My habbies are play golf and table tennis.

>> My hobbies are playing golf and tennis.
But these days I am afraid of corona so I am never playing outdoorsports.

>> But for the past few days, I am afraid of corona virus so I am not playing outdoor.
These days I usually walk on the mountain, walk apartment in the around.

>> For the past few days, I just walk on the mountain and around our apartment.
Anyway I have a new good habby for healty.

>> Anyways, I have a good news for my hobby on being healthy.
Also I am studying hard English. I think this is a good habby.

>> I am studying English and I think this is a good hobby.
Bye bye .....

>> Bye bye.

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