my hamster

my hamster is pretty and cute but sometime my mom don't like hamster. I think becouse my mom see mommy hamster kill and eat baby hamster. but sometime my mom like baby hamster. so I wish someday my mom and hamster is be a friend.

Hello Alice! You\'re such a loving pet owner. I think you\'re right when you said that your mother sometimes doesn\'t like hamster because as a mom, it\'s heartbreaking to see the mommy hamster kill and eat its baby.  That\'s a terrible scene for a mother to see. All mothers love their children but sometimes that doesn\'t apply to animals. Anyway, thanks for sharing this to me. I love reading your compositions. Keep it coming! Always, Teacher Lexi :) Here are my corrections: my hamster is pretty and cute >>Correct (punctuation and capitalization needed - (My/cute.)but sometime my mom don\'t like hamster.>>But sometimes my mom doesn\'t like hamster.I think becouse my mom see mommy hamster kill and eat baby hamster.>>I think because my mom  sees the mommy hamster kill and eat the baby hamster.but sometime my mom like baby hamster.>>But sometimes my mom likes the baby hamster.so I wish someday my  mom and hamster is be a friend. >>So I wish someday, my mom and my hamster can be friends.